Night Mistress

This is very good. I can't wait to read more.

I think it's pretty good. I read historical romance from this time period and you did quite well. i hope you will add another chapter later on.

It's pretty good. Update another piece soon. don't leave us hanging!!!

I like how you portray the emotions in this piece. One question: why did she take him back? Was it because of his good look or something else? I wouldn't ...

This was great! i think you should put up a follow up piece to this.

It's good. I think you should continue it. Could you write a presequel to it? because some thing confuse me, like how long they have know each other and were ...

I like it! Continue it soon. You're writing style is good. Be careful of Run-on sentences.

It's pretty good. Please do continue it. be careful and watch your tenses.

I like it. I do hope that you will continue it.

is that better? i didn't want to post it, because it appear bunch up. that's why i link it to a folder before, but if this is better...

I liked the first book so much, that I couldn't bring myself to read the other ones. I could get past the first few pages, I guess I was excepting ...

I thought the book was pretty good. If you like this book, you should check out her Mediator book series as well. Those are awesome.

it sounds good to me. I'm not a very good crit, so i hope some of the others help out.

This is book was very good when I read it. I love it. Too bad she didn't make a sequel to it.